Tuesday, June 21, 2011

Persuasirve writing

It a good idea for kids to not watch television for one free day, there are many reason for this.

This will save power more often and, get kids playing and being healthy.

Firstly saving power is not terning on the television and will let your electricity lower so you

don’t always got and pay the bill.

Secondly kids can get very strong and very healthy and get them out of bed and train and make your bran good.This will make you lean better.

I think we need to have a break from watching TV. Don’t you?

1 comment:

  1. You followed our persuasive writing format, and have clearly argued that we could do with a little break from TV.
    Good work Onosai.


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