Wednesday, May 11, 2011

Vote for the best Introduction

I have written two introduction paragraphs. Vote for the one you thinks hooks the audience in the most.

It was finally time to go to the movie.It was exciting I fault very happy we went with my uncle and my sister.When my uncle said that we are watching HOP I fault very Bord.

I saw HOP on commercial and it look boring but when I first saw it it was funny every one was laughing at the movie even my uncle and my sister.It was fun watching HOP.

1 comment:

  1. I liked the sconced paragraph because I like funny
    moves and keep up the good work.


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