I have written two introduction paragraphs. Vote for the one you thinks hooks the audience in the most.
It was finally time to go to the movie.It was exciting I fault very happy we went with my uncle and my sister.When my uncle said that we are watching HOP I fault very Bord.
I saw HOP on commercial and it look boring but when I first saw it it was funny every one was laughing at the movie even my uncle and my sister.It was fun watching HOP.
I saw HOP on commercial and it look boring but when I first saw it it was funny every one was laughing at the movie even my uncle and my sister.It was fun watching HOP.
I liked the sconced paragraph because I like funny
ReplyDeletemoves and keep up the good work.